Sunday, February 4, 2007

stupid boy vs. jealous girl

My precious boy, my stupid, precious boy
I know you think I’m just a silly girl
Who likes to tease, to pout, and to annoy
To turn your mind into a savage whirl
I know you think I haven’t got a brain
That’s just the start of your stupidity
I know you feel I’m driving you insane
With vague assaults on your lucidity
But if my adoration is in doubt
And if you think my love is just a game
You haven’t got a clue what love’s about
And, stupid, precious boy, that is a shame
Because in spite of every stupid part
I love you from the bottom of my heart

response

to stupid boy:

My beautiful girl, my jealous, beautiful girl

I know you think I flirt with everyone

Who wants to go out with every girl

To turn your mind against the only one

I know you think I don’t love you

That’s just the beginning of you're jealously

When you see me with another girl you turn into the other you

With madness on your head that you can’t fight the jealously

But if you don’t think I love you

And if you keep believing what people say

You haven’t got a clue of how much I want you

And, jealous, beautiful girl, that is a shame

Because in spite of every stupid part

I love you from the bottom of my heart no matter what.

Author: Ramon Almaguer

Type of poem: Sonnet

source: http://www.sonnetwriters.com/stupid-boy-2

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

that's a cute poem. not. j/k. its sounds just like, Stupid Boy, though

ricky said...

yeah sounds like stupid boy
are you sure youre the author?

seeya Ken-Y

Anonymous said...

hey your crazy ramon your like bigtime upsest!

Javier said...

ramon it sound like you and kassy

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darcy said...

Did you actually write the poem???
Kool way to put two poems together,SMART!!!!
The poem is real nice